Sunday, November 7, 2010

The Egyptian educational system " first draft "



    The education system in Egypt is not only the largest in the Middle East and North Africa region but also one of the largest in the world . The egyptian educational system is highly centralized, and is divided into basic education , which comprises primary stage and preparatory stage , secondary education and post secondary education . The education system in Egypt has two main kinds public education , which is free, and private education which is much more expensive . There is a large number of people who agree that our educational system can achieve the desired aims in high proprotion . On the contrary ,  There is also a large number of people who see that our educational system can not achieve the desired aims in high proprotion .

      People who agree that our educational system can achieve the desired aims in high proprotion build their point of view on some different elements . Firstly , the large proprotion of foreign students who come to Egypt to complete their studies is an evidence on the scientific position of Egypt around the world and also an evidence on the development of the Egyptian educational system . Secondly , The large proprotion of students who pass through the secondary stage to the post secondary stage is an evidence that  our educational system can achieve the desired aims in high proprotion . In my point of view for this direction ,I dis agree with this direction because they neglect the large proprotion of students who can not pass through the secondary stage to the post secondary stage . They also neglect the ways that some students use to pass through the secondary stage, and the post secondary stage because of fraud phenomenon . 

       People who see that our educational system can not achieve the desired aims in high proprotion also build their point of view on some elements . Firstly , The school curriculum, which is in the level of the excellent students  and ignores the average and the weak students .Secondly, the large proprotion of students who can not pass through the secondary stage to the post secondary stage because of the difficulty of the school curriculum .In my point of view for this direction , I also disagree with this direction because they neglect the Egyptian scientists who have the favor around the world  for their scientific contributions which are results of the  Egyptian educational system .they also neglect the large proprotion of foreign students who come to egypt to complete their studies .
  
   Finally , There is not any educational system around the world that is completely right or completely wrong . the Egyptian educational system  has its advantages and disadvantages but it needs to developed in some of its aspects .

1 comment:

  1. First of all your pictures are very expressive.
    Secondly, your draft is well organized and well developed.
    But take care of the following:
    1.The education (educational) system in Egypt
    2. needs to (be) developed in some of its aspects

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