women's work "second draft"

 One of the most important sociological changes in the nation's history began in the last decade of the ninteenth century is the large numbers of women who entered the work force . There is a large proportion of people who agree with the entry of women into the work force, and the same percentage to some extent opposed to this direction . Based on that , women's work is an argumentative topic that we must give much attention to .

 There is a large proportion of people who are opponents to the entry of women into the work force because of women's role in their families . These roles are divided into two important elements , the educational role and the professional role inside their families . Firstly, the educationl role is based on their ability to care of their children, their ability to achieve scientific excellence for their children ,and their ability to maintain the hygiene of the family .Secondly, the professional role is based on the ability to maintain the relationship between them and their husbands and the ability to meet the needs of their husbands permanently . On the contrary , there is the supporter of the other direction who agree with the entry of women into the work force ; Based on  faith in the ability of women to achieve parity between their role in their families and their workloads .

  I agree with the entry of women into the work force but in some certain cases . On the one hand , I agree ,in the case, if the woman is the main financier of the family due to certain circumstances so she must work for the needs of  her family . On the contrary , i disagree with the entry  of women into the work force , in the case of , working for only wasting time. Where the best opportunity for some young people to replace those . So women's work is an argumentative topic that controversy will not end about it .