women's work "second draft"

 One of the most important sociological changes in the nation's history began in the last decade of the ninteenth century is the large numbers of women who entered the work force . There is a large proportion of people who agree with the entry of women into the work force, and the same percentage to some extent opposed to this direction . Based on that , women's work is an argumentative topic that we must give much attention to .

 There is a large proportion of people who are opponents to the entry of women into the work force because of women's role in their families . These roles are divided into two important elements , the educational role and the professional role inside their families . Firstly, the educationl role is based on their ability to care of their children, their ability to achieve scientific excellence for their children ,and their ability to maintain the hygiene of the family .Secondly, the professional role is based on the ability to maintain the relationship between them and their husbands and the ability to meet the needs of their husbands permanently . On the contrary , there is the supporter of the other direction who agree with the entry of women into the work force ; Based on  faith in the ability of women to achieve parity between their role in their families and their workloads .

  I agree with the entry of women into the work force but in some certain cases . On the one hand , I agree ,in the case, if the woman is the main financier of the family due to certain circumstances so she must work for the needs of  her family . On the contrary , i disagree with the entry  of women into the work force , in the case of , working for only wasting time. Where the best opportunity for some young people to replace those . So women's work is an argumentative topic that controversy will not end about it .

women's work "first draft"

   One of the most important sociological changes in the nation's history began in the last decade of the ninteenth century is the large numbers of women who entered the work force . There is a large proportion of people who agree with the entry of women into the work force, and the same percentage to some extent opposed to this direction . Based on that , women's work is an argumentative topic that we must give much attention on it .

 There is a large proportion of people who are opponents to the entery of women into the work force because of women's role that women have in thier families . These roles are divided into two important elements , the educational role and the professional role inside their families . Firstly, the educationl role is based on their ability to care for their children, their ability to achieve scientific excellence for their children ,and their ability to maintain the hygiene of the family .Secondly, the professional role is based on the ability to maintain the relationship between them and their husbands and the ability to meet the needs of their husbands permanently . On the contrary , there is the supporter direction who agree with the entry of women into the work force ; Based on  faith in the ability of women to achieve parity between their role in their families and their workloads .

  I agree with the entiry of women into the work force but with the differing circumstances of women . One the one hand , i agree ,in the case, if the woman is the main financier of the family due to certain circumstances so she must work for the needs of  her family . On the contrary , i disagree with the entiry of of women into the work force , in the case of , working for only wasting time. Where the best opportunity for some young people to replace those . So women's work is an argumentative topic that controversy will not end about it .

women's work "outline"

outline

_women's work is an argumentative topic .

_women's role in society .

_women's rights and duties .

_the supporter and opposite directions of women's work .

_my point of view about this topic .

pollution "final draft"

 

     Pollution is one of the most dangerous phenomenon that we face nowadays. pollution is a change in the physical,chemical,and biological characteristics of air,water and soil that causes adverse effects on humans and other organisms. Pollution has different kinds which are air pollution,water pollution and soil pollution. The most dangerous one of these kinds is air pollution , in my opinion.

   Air polluion is a change in the physical,chemicaland biological characteristics of air. Air pollution has two different elements which are acoustic pollution and visual pollution.Firstly, there are many examples of acoustic pollution such as using the speakers,  and horns improperly . Secondly, there are also many examples of visual pollution such as smoke factories, car exhaust and burning factory waste.in view of above air pollution is caused by its two elements acoustic pollution and visual pollution.

    Air pollution is a very dangerous phenomenon that attacks our health . Air polluion is one of the basic reasons of dangerous diseases such as cancer, hepatitis and other dangerous diseases. As a result , we must suggest some solutions to over come that phenomenon. Some of these solutions ,in my opinion, are in the hands of two important directions, the government and people. Firstly, people must be aware of the danger that attacks us ,and have to be away of things that cause air pollution like these which are mentioned above . Secondly , the government must be away of build new factories in countryside ,not burn factory waste and making impose of fines on factories that cause air pollution .

  Finally, pollution with all its kinds are very dangerous and neglecting one kind , will lead to the appearance of the other kinds that cause mass destruction of humanity.

pollution (outline)

outline

_ the different kinds of pollution :
       *air pollution
       *water pollution
       *soil pollution
_what is air pollution ? and its different elements :
       *acoustic pollution
       *visual pollution

_what causes air pollution ?

_the danger that will attack us through pollution .

_some solutions to overcome pollution phenomenon :
       *the goverment role 
       *people role
    

Air pollution (first draft)

     pollution is one of the most dangerous phenomenon that we face nowadays. pollution is achange in the physical,chemical,and biological characteristics of air,water and soil that causes adverse effects on humans and other organisms. pollution has different kinds which are air pollution,water pollution and soil pollution. the most dangerous one of these is air pollution in my opinion.

   air polluion is achange in the physical,chemicaland biological characteristics of air. air pollution has two different elements which are acoustic pollution and visual pollution.firstly, there are many examples of acoustic pollution such as using the speakers, horns improperly . secondly, there are also many examples of visual pollution such as smoke factories, car exhaust and burning factory waste.according to the above mentioned air pollution is caused by its two elements acoustic pollution and visual pollution.

    air pollution is a very dangerous phenomenon that attacks our health . air polluion is one of the basic reasons of dangerous diseases such as cancer, hepatitis and other dangerous diseases. as aresult for that we must suggest some solutions to over come that phenomenon. some of these solutions ,in my opinion, are in the hands of two important directions, the government and people. firstly, people must be aware of the danger that attacks us ,and have to be away of things that cause air pollution like these which are mentioned above . secondly , the government must be away of building new factories in countryside , burning factory waste and making imposition of fines on factories that cause air pollution .

  Finally, pollution with all its kinds are very dangerous and neglecting one kind of these , will lead to appearance of the other kinds that cause mass destruction of humanity.

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